Pitch Feedback

 My feedback mainly consisted of the title, many opted for the use of La Vie instead of the others, maybe however still in the monoton font and in a red tone.

The reason that the idea for the name "Shhhh!" was not popular was due to the implication it made. It could potentially imply that the topics in my magazine shouldn't be discussed which is the opposite of my goal.

Many liked my idea of making my magazine about modern social issues and so will keep that idea. It makes it relevant to generation Z which is my target audience.

My ideas of incorporating the subverted gender norms also seemed to go down well and thus I shall make my real life magazine “La Vie” incorporating traditional real life magazine colours and about real people who aren't the dominant ideology. I will also use the shrikhand font

In order to keep the classic look of one of Bauer's real life magazines, I will opt to use the bold red and yellow colours on the front cover, however I want to subvert the "gossip" and "trashy" convention and make my magazine more classy. I will still include shock headlines etc but make the focus on social issues, and take the subjects seriously.

My original idea was to have an agony aunt section of my newspaper, but I was suggested to call it agony uncle in keeping with my magazines progressive messaging so will take that idea on board for my newspaper.